that's sad. wonder why lilith did that..... its like things are never going be the same between them now..... you must write more and soon......well done Raff

oh please please don't make Raphael hates her please. Because if he did hate her, I'll hate him for being superficial. But WOW I just loved it so much!

Azariel Darkmoon and Blood_Craver: Lillith did it because she believe that it would be what Raphael wanted, but he was too scared to take it for himself.

Things wont be the same between them. Something has changed immensely, not just a surface change.

Raphael didn't want Shanae to become a Vampire because of some, I must admit, rather superficial reasons. No longer will he be able to drink from her, be in a position to protect her, be different from her. That's what he loved the most in their relationship. He loved how different they were from each other, and yet how close they also were.

He wanted to be the one to change her as well. When a Vampire fosters another, there is a bond created between them. Raphael wanted that bond between them as well, because it would be another link in their chain. Vampire and human, Vampire and fosterling. It's not just love to him, it's... It's something unexplainable. It's not just her blood, her body, her existence, her heart, her soul, her mind. It's the way the moon pulls the tides, how magnets attract, how the sky is blue, how cats chase dogs. It's unquestionable. He still loves her, but now he's unsure whether his Shanae will still be his Shanae.

Wow... that was longer than I thought it would be...

No it isn't long. It's actually very informative and cleared some things up. So will you make up for the missing part? I mean somehow to make the reader not so horribly upset from Raphael even if his acts were reasonable. I mean, some people might not like the fact that he doesn't like her like before. I actually love the idea. It's more truthful and real. yea it kinda reflects the reality of normal and actual personalities. but maybe you could think of something that could make up the way Raphael feels. Something like she doesn't become as powerful as he is. or maybe that her personality didn't change much.

I'm speechless. Raff could you be anymore amazing?

This totally exceeded any expectations.
^_^

Shanae now stands out from the crowed, she isn't physically or mentally the same as she was before.
She's more confident, smarter, faster, all of that stuff that Vampire inherit when they're fostered (just my little slang for what people normally call 'sired' if anyone was wondering ^.^), and Raphael dislikes how cocky she becomes. She starts believing that she is his equal and is a lot more pushy.
Or it's the new girl that starts at school...

New girl? What new girl?

Oh come on. You can't leave it like that.
*pouts*

That's so awesome. <3 it. Keep writing = you're amazing at it. :]

Can't wait for the next part..

Wait new girl????
What new girl????
I want more!!!!
You are amazing!!!!!!

LILITH IS SUCH A .........BRAT...GRRRR. that is soooo disrespectful to ralphael..how ever you spell it..lol