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Old 03-13-2008, 08:54 PM
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ok, the editing is done, the cover art is almost finished and the book will be offically avlible soon... i know you've all been waiting patiently, and i greatly apreciate your patients. your wait is almost over!

here is a teaser for you...

From Incubus Succubus by me L.A. Nantz

…She had called the doctor and convinced him this must be done, the price for doing it she paid, but in the end so did the doctor. For two hours they sat there, his blood slowly working its way through hers.
Now that her body was too weak to fend him off, the doctor, all she could do was lay there and watch, as the doctor had his way with her after the transfusion was done. Her chest had been the center of his attention all during the process, drawing that other mans blood, her blood, and then mixing them.
He had looked at her chest the whole time, knowing it would be exposed soon. All his life he had wanted this moment, then came the long needle through her sternum, and the pumping of the fire into her body… she blacked out.
When she came too, the doctor had her completely undressed and was on top of her, in her, violating her with every ounce of his power. She lay under him feeling his every movement, stimulating her body, awakening it to sensations she had never known. This old man would pay for this, but for now all she could do was lay there. When he saw her eyes open, wide and staring, screaming at him with the fury of hell, he stopped a beat, slowed his pace to watch her, fearful she might resist. But for her breath, she did not move, and then he smiled.
“Well if you’re goin'na die I want to send you to hell with a smile “He said, but his lips never moved, the sound never came from his mouth, and then began pumping away at her harder. Each movement sent through her another jolt of what felt like lightning blasting her body, but each time the pain would lessen and the pleasure would grow.
Neither of them realized her arms were around him 'til he could not push up and away any longer. He went to scream but found her mouth on his, her tongue deep inside his mouth, the very breath of life was being sucked out of him. She rolled him over so she was on top, then sat strait up and let out a noise that was neither scream, moan, or human, then back down on top of him she lay, driving herself onto him now.
This time it was his turn to scream, he could not stop, his body was no longer his own, it moved in time to the rhythm of her heart, beating faster and with more fury. So too did his body into hers begin to move, faster, harder, he would thrust, his heart straining to keep up with the overwhelming pain that was upon him. He felt his mouth full of wet copper and he knew his blood was leaking out through his mouth, she was drinking every last drop, consuming him as he raped her.
Then it was over, her body was shaking with the force of her new found life, the orgasm of her birth became the seizure of his death.
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Old 03-19-2008, 08:52 PM
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wow!
that has a lot of imagery
-really well done!
I loved the ay you describe the sexual part-kissing
and how you use a multiple amount of words to incapsulate what the novel is really about at this moment. Through using all these words you create such a fgood atmosphere that will keep the readers reading on-really good well done from me!
:P
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Old 03-20-2008, 06:06 AM
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Wow, that's pretty good.
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Old 03-20-2008, 06:14 AM
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very well done
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Old 03-21-2008, 12:44 AM
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thank you all... i am just waiting on the cover art to be completed then it will be released ot the general market.
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