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Old 01-03-2008, 01:31 AM
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(This is a story that I started to make but I have yet to think of a good title for it. Now its not the best that I can do but a ton of my friends said that I should post it on websites and see what people think. To help me in creating more things you know?)

Chapter 1~

The pain courses through Adam's body and the feeling of loss overwhelms him. There at his feet the pray he chased, the food he wanted, laded at his feet lifeless. He didn't want this and he wanted to become who he was before, but nothing and everything he did seemed not to change the fact that he was already dead. "Living yet not alive. We share something together and I can tell your life is coming to an end. So what shall it be? Life or Death?" those words ran through his head.
"I don't know. I don't want this!! I DON'T WANT THIS!!!!!!!!" he screamed into the air, nothing around him and no one there to make sure he finishes through. Suddenly he turned, a noise clear in his ears. There standing not far away, shaded by darkness, a man stood there. He was old but that old and his hair was like fine black silk. His eyes were closed but something was telling Adam that behind those eyes lay darkness and death. The man was just like him. An image of what he was to become, a person dead and covered in the blood of his food. To become something that does not live, but walks this earth and ground like everyone else. To be something that others do not know about, but somewhere deep inside already feel and fear those like him. Adam stumbled back and looked towards his food, towards the death that lay in front of him. Was he going to become something like that? A child of death? A forgotten thing? A Vampire?
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Old 01-07-2008, 08:41 PM
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It is a very beautiful story, you should really continue I want to know what happens next *smiles*
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Old 01-09-2008, 04:21 PM
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Well then if you will allow me I shall write the next part to it and then send it to you in a messsage? Shall I?
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Old 01-09-2008, 06:37 PM
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Yes please, I would be very grateful!
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Old 01-10-2008, 03:49 PM
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Well then please do look forward to getting the next part soon.
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Old 01-10-2008, 04:37 PM
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I will...
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Old 01-10-2008, 08:28 PM
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Very good.
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Old 01-11-2008, 03:17 PM
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I am having a little trouble though. I want to know if there is anything that you would like me to put in it. I cant think of any ideas at the moment so i thought that that you might be able to help me out a little.
Any ideas?
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Old 01-11-2008, 05:13 PM
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Hmm, yeah a bit, maybe a girl
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Old 01-15-2008, 04:23 PM
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A Vampire love to a women? I like that.
I thank you.
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