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05-23-2008, 10:36 AM
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2 poems
Coming for you
I deserve it.
I knew your game.
You didn't even notice,
I played your game.
And you played mine.
Caulght you in lies.
If it was just me,
It would have been fine.
But you F***ed with her.
And that's what I can't accept.
You messed with my family,
It was our family.
You should have known better.
I take back all promises, and
You know exactly what I mean.
You have no idea,
How deep my hate is.
This is like a shattered glass,
Only a fool would try to fix it.
I want to see you.
In pain,
Bleeding,
begging,
On the edge of a cliff.
I want to wrap my hands around your throat.
I want to choke the life from you.
Screaming my name as you die.
And in that last moment as you black out.
I'll let go,
Push you off the cliff,
and
Never think of you again.
Hellfire Blades
Have you been waiting for me sinner?
Thinking of all the things I can do.
What happened last night
will not compare to the pain
That I will unleash onto you.
Lying in the bed of salt.
Twisted looks of pain.
I can feel it in the air.
All the pain you endured.
You did anything to survive.
Never did you move .
Bring out the pencil and paper.
Master needs his report.
Putting it aside as I check your wounds.
Caked blood along your skin.
Last I played with masks and needles.
Time to play with the blade.
Little sinner, do you want to know
How I got here in the first place?
I bled myself out.
Sending my soul to Hell.
And now you shall suffer
The exact same fate as I did.
With your tongue and eyes ripped out.
Can you feel the cold of the blade?
Upon your silky white skin?
As the cut deepens.
Your face contorts in agony.
So you can feel it sinner.
Skin peeling away from flesh,
Revealing more to play with.
For in Hell you can never die.
Until your sins have been repented.
But tonight you will heal.
So I can play with you again.
Worse than the physical pain.
This will scar you for eternity.
But with the blade, I am not finished
Marking your skin in such a way
That all in Hell will know
You were my puppet on strings
For me to do my will with
Blood splatters against floor and walls
Such a waste
Little sinner, my time to leave again
Think all you like my puppet
But only tomorrow you will know
Just how I will make you mine forever
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05-23-2008, 10:48 AM
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RE: 2 poems
One is new, one is old.
Blah... Blah... Blah...
I'm sure you can figure it out.
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05-23-2008, 10:54 AM
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True Blood
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RE: 2 poems
both great jr. i love them both
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05-23-2008, 10:58 AM
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RE: 2 poems
Thanks ^_^
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05-26-2008, 05:14 AM
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RE: 2 poems
um wow, i love the last one, sends a creeping chill up ur spine
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05-26-2008, 05:40 AM
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RE: 2 poems
thanks hun. Yeah I wrote that one after Bobby.... did what he did.... yeah.
The first one is more of a I'm pissed, I hate you, and want to kill you rant.
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05-26-2008, 01:33 PM
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RE: 2 poems
ah.
they both are amaze.
i like the second one a bit better tho.
but yuv got great talent.
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05-27-2008, 03:28 AM
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RE: 2 poems
Thank you, Tibby. 
I like the second one better too.
My only problem is people keep plagiarizing it.
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06-17-2008, 08:30 PM
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BANNED
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mars..
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09-01-2008, 04:48 AM
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huh? lol don't know what to say to that....
lol I know spammer haha oh well it's still kinda funny
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