Drink from the poison I offer you
Life will never be the same again
a gate will open in front of you
you left behing the world of men

Gasp in the darkness
open your eyes to light
look at what I now show you
Beyond the battle, there's no need to fight

Light and dark will re-unite

Blaze 2006

well done. cryptic and coded yet also easliy understood if you come from that line....

Thank you...

I found some more...

The sword lies between us

Bound to eachother,
enemies are we.
It began with love,
it ended with lives.

Both on the same side,
fighting together.
Untill the times changed,
war came upon us.

Times 'll change once again,
so will our places...
The sword now lies between us,
once we'll fight the same faces.

******

Immortals

Every tear that has been cried, the've catched
They've made the oceans and the rivers
Rivers of the eternal tears, never to dry
Oceans, a hurricane of restless emotions...........

Every drop of blood that has been spilled,
They've saved, They've possesed,
The life source for the Earth
Their life source for the night......

Every scar that had been made on our bodies, will be kissed
For wounds will be healed, With a slight touch of their hands
it's just a matter of time............
To feel a feeling whom is impossible to describe.......

They have surrounded us, Like an energy source of heat
Followed us, embraced us in every alley we went
Touched by an unnatural love
Cold, freezing and yet so warm and peacefull..

Blaze

I like them a lot. they're very good.

Thank you!

impressive work.... you should check out the inside..... post. i wrote those.

'Gasp in the darkness..' I love that bit! It's a really nice poem - kind of chilling but at the same time it's beautiful.

The second poem is great, I love the first four lines in particular. It confuses me a bit though (as everything does after double maths).

The third poem is definately my favourite! It's mysterious but it's clear what you're writing about. Some of the phrases you use, '...hurricane of restless emotions' and 'Touched by an unnatural love', are beautiful. Epic poetry. :]

Thank you Harriettt for your respons..

I agree about your opinion of the first poem... chilling but beautiful!

all very good, immortals is the one that sticks out for me

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