i'm gals you approve. like i said before, there will be more, so check back....

Those were very good poems my dear son. I'm sorry that you have this darkness inside you. If you need to talk, like I 've said before, just pm me. I will always answer you and try to be there as much as I can.
Give you a big hug and a sweat kiss on the for head. Your family is here for you my dear son.
love your mother,
Alexandria

thank you all for your support. keep checking back, but the majority are like this.... like mother said, i have anger issues, and this is how i deal with them.

Then keep writing them. We all have our own ways of dealing with anger and if that's yours then your doing very well. I'd rather ready your really good poems instead of knowing that you raged out in other ways. I'm very proud of you.

well.......um oops...... i was kinda sorta gonna really kill a lycan that was snooping around my house..... dad and susej talked me out of it though......

hey every one heres the new one for today...

"Nightmare"

wicked dreamscapes in my head,
demons ****ing with me...
can't go on this way.
trapped in this lost reality,
my life is fading away...

everyday is a nightmare
that i can't escape...
everyday is torture
and i can't get away...

screams all around.
i am falling down, deeper,
into this morbid hell...
is there no escape,
cause my life is fading quickly away...

everyday is a nightmare,
that i can't escape...
everyday is hell,
and i can't get away...

wicked dreamscapes in my head
demons ****ing with me
i won't go on like this
always trapped in this lost reality
my life is fading away...

no more...


well there you guys go, enjoy and tell me your thoughts....

i think this one's your darkest so far, and it show's that tis from the soul... i wish you would be a little bit happier! it hurts me to know that you're so depressed inside. but maybe it is just the way you write. I know I, myself, write deeply and sometimes scare myself it's so dark. But in reality, i'm not that dark. i hope your life may get brighter.

no thats the way it is on the inside. i've learned that at a young age and have learned to accept it. it comes in handy some times, may be the source of my strength..... i dunno.....

I recognize the feelings you descripe in the poems...
I recognize them from a long time ago.

Beautiful way to express yourself...

Blaze

The repitition is affective, definately getting the point across and you use nice images in your writing. 'always trapped in this lost reality..' like this line in particular. Really good poem. :] And yeaah, it's good this is how you choose to release anger.

Once again, epic stuff. :]