I feel the heat from your body
sinking in on mine
and closer in time
I'm sure you'll feel mine.
The pressure between us
the strength of your arms.
The night is but young,
and I know it is ours.
Intensity pushes all mortal thoulghts away
I know that tomorrow will be just a day.
Another day at school when we will just say
that last night we were studying all the tests for today
And we were.
We were testing the love between lies.
the pressure of him,
and the pain between mine.
Nothing is new to those who don't try
Nothing's more painful than sex and goodbye.
Pretending nothing happened
is harder than it seems.
And if you don't agree
then your living off dreams.

Again this is another one of mine.
This is one of my earlier poems, from March 2003.

I absolutely fell in love with this poem, my love. It is very true. I love the way you wrote it. I think it's the best I've ever read, and I admire it deeply. If only I could write in such ways..*sighs* :]

Thank you ^_^
Awh shucks. That means alot.

lol... I hope I didn't mean to embarass you or anything...

No, it's just strange to hear people say they like it. Most people just roll their eyes

I shall never lie or do such a thing..

Thanks

no problem!!!

this is sooo good!