A brand spankin new poem. lol yup.
You know the drill.
What cha think?
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I spend sometime with an Angel.
Her beauty is blinding.
She can look into the deepest recess of my mind.
And see who I am.
She see's who I want to be.
When I look in to her eyes.
I see the perfect day.
A blue sky,
the birds singing,
waves crashing,
people surfing.
Love is found,
on white sandy beaches.
But like everything,
it must come to an end.
So as the connection begins to falter.
The sky turns gray,
The birds stop singing,
The waves become violent,
The people surfing leave.
Love is lost into the night.
The connection is now broken.
And new tears fall.
Recounting all the beauty.
I look up,
The Angel is gone,
replaced only,
by silence.

wow. I can really visualize what you're seeing. It starts out like you have something in your grip that you've been waiting for, then it's all lost, out of your grip. It's very powerful.

I agree. I can picture every word as if it were happening right now. Outstanding!

Thanks guys!!
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I'm glad you like it.

ah, that make makes me want to cry. So well wrote.

Thank you Alexandria. ^_^
I actually was crying at the end.

Now I'm embarassed

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“I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve.” J.R.R. Tolkien

"aller au diable. gehen in die Hölle. du-te la dracu."

I am strong, for I am a Corvinus. I will survive.

i really understand the feeling....... its all right there and then.........gone. its a terrible way to feel. ps send me a pm i need to tell you some thing that i forgot....

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...What is Faith but Misplaced Hope?...


Whoever appeals to the law against his fellow man is either a fool or a coward.
Whoever cannot take care of himself without that law is both.
For a wounded man shall says to his assailant
"If I live, Iwill kill you, If I die you are Forgiven"
Such is the Rule of Honor.

"you can tell the same lie a thousand times, but it never gets any more true"

...Facilis Decensus Averno...

Yeah........

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“I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve.” J.R.R. Tolkien

"aller au diable. gehen in die Hölle. du-te la dracu."

I am strong, for I am a Corvinus. I will survive.

*snaps* Once again another amazing poem!
One minute things are great then it all goes down the drain

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