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04-26-2008, 09:46 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Florida, USA
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Cheating
I know you're cheating on me tonight,
You said you probably won't,
But might.
I can't take it,
The fright;
The worry;
I just don't want to hear
"I'm sorry".
I definately don't want to hear
the story..
For they are probably lies.
If you tell me something fiction,
I'm going to die inside.
You told me you love me,
And stole my heart.
Then you ran off...
You left me in the dark.
I know the truth,
So you will see.
I can't trust you,
We weren't meant to be..
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*This is from his view*
I'm out on the dance floor,
With this girl I just met.
She's one of the finest,
So I said, "What the heck?"
While we're grinding,
I think of you.
All the while,
You're saying it's through.
I told you that it would never end,
And you were saying it all would depend.
Now I see what you were thinking...
I said I loved you,
But I was lying.
I was playing the cards,
To see what I could get.
I won your heart,
But not your head.
Take it,
Or leave it.
I'll take it and go.
I'm yours for today,
But not for tomorrow.
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05-02-2008, 01:30 AM
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Pupil
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: I am lost in the dark abyass in my mind....someone find me and set me free!!!
Age: 18
Posts: 127
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RE: Cheating
Wow!!!!
I know how this feels.
I had a couple of cheating boyfrineds.
I thought for the longest time that they really did love me.
Then I found out that It was just a lie.
Now i feel so stupid for not seeing it before.
Becasue it was just so god damn obvious.
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05-02-2008, 01:38 AM
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Apprentice
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: La Romantica
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RE: Cheating
I could totally relate to this poem!
Very good!
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05-02-2008, 02:02 AM
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Pupil
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Seattle, Washington
Age: 17
Posts: 203
Credits: 680
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RE: Cheating
nice!
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05-02-2008, 03:10 AM
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Apprentice
True Blood
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Western Pa
Posts: 3,060
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RE: Cheating
very good
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05-02-2008, 11:18 AM
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Pupil
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Florida, USA
Posts: 165
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RE: Cheating
thanks you guys! well, vampyre princess kris, That's why i wrote it. he told me he loved me and i actually BELIEVED him!!! urg, i'll know better the next time though.. and the worse part of it all, was that he was cheating on me with my best friend!!
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05-02-2008, 07:45 PM
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Pupil
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: I am lost in the dark abyass in my mind....someone find me and set me free!!!
Age: 18
Posts: 127
Credits: 77
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RE: Cheating
Yea mine did the same.
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05-02-2008, 10:41 PM
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Mortal
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Join Date: May 2008
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RE: Cheating
I like it, espcially the guy part. It shows the alternate angle the point of view that you don't normally look at when it comes to things like that.
I am happy to say that none of my boyfriends have ever cheated on me [As far as I know] and though I don't know who you [Or very many others on this site yet] are I am agreved to hear that you had to go through that...
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05-04-2008, 01:14 AM
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Fledgeling
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: UK
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RE: Cheating
Very good poem from both perspectives. Unfortunately I've had this done to me but we live and learn.
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