I promise I won't cut myself,
I promise I won't bleed.
I promise I won't yell or scream,
Or be your evil seed.
I promise I won't sleep tonight,
Thinking of nothing but me.

I promise I'll be your golden child
Who's everything to perfection.
I promise to wear that yellow dress,
So mama, please stop stressin'.

Aaah, lovely!
'...so mama, please stop stressin'.' I LOVELOVELOVE that line. It's kind of a chirpy poem. The idea of it is really beautful.
The first part is a bit more sinister but I still really like it. Again, it's the contrast of a promise (a positive thing) and bleeding or hurting (a negative thing).
'..I promise I won't sleep tonight.' is a really powerful line. Sounds like a line that might be in a My Chemical Romance song.
Really, really good. Please post some more
How do you come up with all of these amazing poems? It takes me about six months to come up with one single line that is half decent. >__<

Yeah, well, I wrote the first part all sinister like, and then I wanted the second part to represent who I used to be, and try for it to be positive and happy. My mom bought me this yellow dress and I would never wear it.. I've always worn dark colours. Then, when she was about to die in the hospital, I put on the yellow dress. I had thought she was dieing because I was stressing her out too much. So that's where that line came from..

Thanks for the welcoming comments!!! I would really like to know what I could improve on though.!!

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