I feel very helpless,
I don't know what to do.
Your suffering is not painless,
you haven't got One clue.
Your pain is like ripping, sharp stabs,
in a hole that has renewed.
I sit here crying and helpless,
holding my sides like glue
for if I let one finger loose,
There'd be nothing left
for me to choose.
I'd cry myself dry,
Wanting to confort you...
I know this is impossible,
And we wouln't make it through.
So we have to be strong,
...Find another way.
You know if we don't try,
There'd be no other day.

Ha.... This was one of my first poems in my whole life.
I just found carved in a piece of wood on the inside of
my bed.

You know if we don't try,
There'd be no other day.
Gosh I loved those lines in specific the most!! I loved the way you ended it. Good job! Post more please

very good poem my friend

That was beautiful.
Do you have any other poetry?

Your suffering is not painless,
you haven't got One clue.
Your pain is like ripping, sharp stabs,
in a hole that has renewed.

I like those two lines. They sung out to me most out of all of them.
Carved under your bed, you say? Cool haha.

Raffxo

'...I sit here crying and helpless,
holding my sides like glue
for if I let one finger loose,
There'd be nothing left...'

I love those lines. The detail (about the glue) is lovely and the whole poem is brilliant. It provokes such a strong feeling and the imagery you use is great.

Good job, write up another!

I was a very good poem my dear. I would like to hear more. I could see you sitting there while you held your sides. Knowing what needed to be done. Yet, not know how to talk with that person that you felt the pain over. good poem

Thank you for the compliment. I enjoyed writing it. My love and I found that we could no longer be together, and I just started carving. I can't believe 'twas still there. But thank you.

Thank you, I didn't think it was so beautiful...but still, thank you.
I'm glad I can reach the minds of some, and please them all the same. Yes, I guess I forgot I had carved it... I'm thinking I wanted to forget about it, so I carved it in a place not easily hidden. I think you are brilliant. I've read your story and posts and such.