my love - is in the sunset
and in the ocean waves
her eyes hold the same beauty
as the suns descend
she makes my heart race-
like the rush of the playful tide
this love-like a walk in the sand-
slow and unending
her mind so beautiful-
an eagle in full flight
her touch, cosmic as the stars at night
her eyes-as lively-
as the comets playing in the sky
my love-is in the sunset
only i fear the day-
when the sun don't rise again

awesome. you have potential to be an outstanding writer.

i much enjoyed this piece.

This is beautiful. I see how much you love her!
And i know that you are always worried that one day you will wake up and it will all just be pretend.

yeah ur the only one who seems to understand that. i loves u coco puffs! lol