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04-10-2008, 09:51 PM
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Pupil
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: I am lost in the dark abyass in my mind....someone find me and set me free!!!
Age: 18
Posts: 127
Credits: 77
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My Poems!!
I am going to have some of my best poems here. Here on of them.
Poem #1
WITHOUT YOU
Two seconds apart,
But it feels like days.
Miles away,
Wanting to be c;oser.
Crying myself to sleep,
Just to past the time.
Don't want you to know,
What I feel inside.
Loveing,
The time spent together.
Missing,
Every second we're apart.
Come home soon,
Cause I don't know what to do without you.
This one is to my baby I miss him so much. I hate him being so far away. I wish I could see him soon.
Poem #2
This one is to one of my ex-boyfriends he hurt me more than i could stood and yet i still loved him.
SCREAMING
Crying out,
Wanting you back.
Screaming,
To the highest cloud.
Can't help,
But love you touch.
Always wanted,
To feel your body next to mine.
Your touch,
Is what I crave.
Your kiss,
Is what I ache for.
God, I can't Help it,
I just want you body to be mine.
Please, Please,
Help me! What am I to do?
I wish I knew,
Why my body is screaming for you.
Help me, Help me,
I want to let go of you.
Kill me please,
To rid me of these feelings.
I can't stand the pain,
I went through when I was with you.
Poem #3
This is to the same ex. Stupis ass!!!
I HATE YOU
I hate you,
You put me throught hell.
I hate you,
You say you love me.
I hate you,
You play games with me heart.
I hate you,
It seems like everyday you tear my life apart.
I hate you,
No matter how much I try I can't.
I hate you,
What am I to do.
I hate you,
Without you I feel so lost.
I hate you,
With you I feel confused.
I hate you
Why did you hurt me so.
I hate you,
No, Wait I changed my mind
I hate to say I Love You!!!
And that I all for now.
Until next Time.
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04-10-2008, 09:57 PM
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Apprentice
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Michigan
Posts: 2,164
Credits: 5,835
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RE: My Poems!!
Girl I love 'em.
But don't forget what he did you to... To us...
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04-13-2008, 04:15 AM
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Fledgeling
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Age: 16
Posts: 68
Credits: 30
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RE: My Poems!!
wow, i still don't have the guts to post the ones that i wrote b/c of him. at least u got it out there.
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04-18-2008, 02:12 AM
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Pupil
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: I am lost in the dark abyass in my mind....someone find me and set me free!!!
Age: 18
Posts: 127
Credits: 77
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RE: My Poems!!
Round 2 of my poems.
Poem #4
A BLOODY VALENTINE
A white rose,
Stained red.
A lover,
Found dead.
The true murder,
Was hidden.
A mask of lies,
A love that was forbiden.
They wanted,
One another.
But they knew,
Someone had to suffer.
One of them,
Is running out of time.
On this card,
A bloody valentine.
Poem #5
NEVER
Why was she hurt?
Why is she gone?
He never knew that is was her love,
That made him strong.
In her eyes,
He did fall.
Now that she is gone,
He doesn't feel as tall.
He blew his chance,
To get her back.
Now all he wants,
Is to have her back.
She's gone from earth,
But Still here all the same.
He wants to move on,
But he feels like she is playing a game.
She was hurt,
And confused.
He is broken,
not ot mention bruised.
A love that was meant to,
Last forever.
Was broken by the,
Single word never.
Poem #6
TRAPT
A heart that was broken,
Just to be hurt.
A love that was stolen,
When one went berserk.
A trust that was lost,
By the death that had bound.
A love was teh cost,
When they came around.
The truth they were told,
Was what would set them free.
They were just to bold,
To see how their could really be.
Two are gone,
But five remain.
Never to see the sight of day,
At those words the worl id the same.
Love is the way out,
But not when you are trapted.
No one close to hear you shout,
But each and every day you get attacked.
Poem #7
NIGHTMARE
The dark closes around her,
A hend reaches out like a cure.
She is lost,
In her own world.
A boy pulls her close,
she pushs him away.
Afriad of a life,
That has love and friends.
Tells lies of the life,
That is the truth for her.
A dream that she can't escape,
A nightmare that take control.
She gave up on life,
death took her.
In the nightmare she made.
That is all for now keep checking back to see more.
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04-18-2008, 02:16 AM
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Apprentice
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Michigan
Posts: 2,164
Credits: 5,835
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RE: My Poems!!
I like Never & Trapt. 
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04-18-2008, 02:19 AM
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Pupil
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: I am lost in the dark abyass in my mind....someone find me and set me free!!!
Age: 18
Posts: 127
Credits: 77
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RE: My Poems!!
Really those were just my whatever poems. I know that when i rote them i was really sad and that was how i felt at the time.
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05-02-2008, 11:30 PM
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Mortal
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Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 14
Credits: 21
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RE: My Poems!!
I really liked Nightmare and A Bloody Valentine they were my favorite!
-Toby
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05-03-2008, 12:25 AM
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Pupil
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: I am lost in the dark abyass in my mind....someone find me and set me free!!!
Age: 18
Posts: 127
Credits: 77
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RE: My Poems!!
Thanx Toby.
I USED to feel like that but I am better now.
I am Better becasue I have the bestest Boyfrind in the world.
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05-21-2008, 12:22 AM
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Pupil
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: I am lost in the dark abyass in my mind....someone find me and set me free!!!
Age: 18
Posts: 127
Credits: 77
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RE: My Poems!!
Here are some more of my poems.
PAIN
Pain
That is what I felt when you left me.
Pain
Now you can finally be free.
Pain
Why can't you see?
Pain
Is how I was set free.
Pain
That was how you hurt me.
Pain
Now I am dead.
Pain
How do you feel now that you can't see me.
LOST
Lost
Don't know where I am.
Lost
No one cares to find me.
Lost
I was found only to be forgotten.
Lost
My family doesn't care where I am.
Lost
With no one to turn to.
Lost
Not caring about the world.
Lost
Never to be found again.
Lost
Dead to the world.
Lost
only my body carries one.
Lost
My soul gone forever.
ALL IT TOOK
Days ago she was hurt
Now all that was found was her shirt.
She ran away
Her family thought that she would stay.
Now she is dead
All of her clothes stained blood red.
To her friends it was no surprize
For they saw the darkness in her eyes.
She was all to nice the day before.
Now her body is ice, clod to the core.
the blood pooled at her feet
That was the fate she was destined to meet.
Two cuts is all it took
For a girl that would never get a second look.
That is all for now check back later for more.
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