Broken
Lying on the ground. Death
Already
Closing in.
Keep tellinf
Everyone
Never let go because
Everything could
Die.

Ready to give up
On everyhting
Said to me, becasue
Everything was a lie.

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that is good, i like it. It's really short, you should write some longer ones.

Yay, I like it

Oh come on hun... post more. You're really good. Where's that one. From last year in C's?