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04-06-2008, 06:32 AM
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I wrote the other night
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...and so, I get high. With a lighter in one hand and my escape in the other, I sit on one thought the rest of the night. I gaze at the keyboard while I listen to my thoughts bounce off the walls of this silent, somber room. I drink, in detail, all the memories recently created. Through modern day device, you dispatch your lingering voice. I trace the footnotes back to my own insanity. Invisible tears collect, and panic pursues the details of the day. Dreams elusive, there is no rest for the damned. Nothing is wrong, if that’s what I choose. Sink this shrouded bottle deep inside. Tomorrow comes as if nothing happened.
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04-06-2008, 05:01 PM
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RE: I wrote the other night
This is really good, I like it. =]
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04-06-2008, 05:08 PM
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RE: I wrote the other night
Thank you..!
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04-06-2008, 06:24 PM
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RE: I wrote the other night
This is excellent, i like poems i can actually "see" happening.
excellent job.
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04-06-2008, 11:03 PM
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RE: I wrote the other night
Thank you very much, FireFox. It is really appreciated.
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04-07-2008, 01:12 AM
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RE: I wrote the other night
Your poem is very visual. It's awesome!
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04-07-2008, 02:58 AM
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RE: I wrote the other night
Thank you.
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04-07-2008, 03:01 AM
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RE: I wrote the other night
Thank you, for writeing it.
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04-08-2008, 02:24 PM
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RE: I wrote the other night
Eh, I've been through this before... Nice imagery.
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04-09-2008, 12:18 PM
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RE: I wrote the other night
thank you, damage reaction.
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