losing my mind
i've lost control
removed from body
refused a new soul
getting a ghostly flesh
i still remain not to be known
for i have killed my name
feeling cold, feeling empty, feeling nothing
no more i have
the erge to go forward is slipping away
for i am now
but a utterless corpes
dying faster and faster
lying under the rain
my hope for life goes down the drain
now condemed with hopeless soul
i have given up a red blazing fire
to have gain a darken flame
now i have given into death
the light of good has been slain

I like it, but it's seems sad...

Alright, um...WICKED!! It totally touched me! I loved the way you gradually tell us about how you feel as if you're talking with us in person. You actually felt it exactly like you wrote it, right?

Just remember to capitalize the letter "I" and every letter in the beginning of the phrase. Also, make it "But an utterless corpse". I would recommend 'silent' or 'tacit' or 'soundless' instead of 'utterless'