FIRE and HOPE

The fire in my eyes;
Gone forever, never to return
Nothing but ashes left;
I feel so cold;
I have no feeling anymore;

But then I see her;
And there is a spark;
Suddenly a smoldering arises
Within me;
Once so cold, now I find warmth;
An unfamiliar feeling;
It feels so strange;
I enjoy it so much,
And wish it never to leave;

But then she walks away,
And the fire is gone again;
But something is still there;
What is it?
And then I realize
That it is the hope that the
Warmth will return
And that she will return to me;
That hope becomes reality;
As she walks back into my life
That once had no meaning;
I have now found love,
And I wish it never to leave;
Bad luck has trailed me all
My life;
Again I have a hope;
A hope that will too become a
Reality;
The bad luck is gone;
And she is mine for all eternity;


whatcha guys think????

it's lovely

whyvthank you...
do you think it would be good enough for a high school petry contest, cuz that's what i wrote it for...

yes, definatly..if you think the people judging would appreciate it..
i'm impressed at how long you maintained it for without slacking the quality...i can never finnish a poem.

thanks. i usauly can't either, os i know that feeling very well.
i've done some stupid things in my life, and lately i've been thinking about them alot. that's where this one came form as well as the other one i put up.......
have you read the other one, i'm prolly putting that one in the contest oo....

I dont even have to tell you... lol

yes shane. i know you like it. you already told me what you think...lol
luv ya!!!!!!

i'll read your other one in a minuet..are they inspired by your own emotions & experiances?

yeah.....