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09-21-2008, 01:19 PM
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If You Were With Me Now
If you were with me now
I would find myself in you
If you were with me now
You are the only one who knew
All the things we planned to do.
I want to live my life
The way you said I would
With courage as my lights
Fighting for what is right
Like you made me believe I could.
I will fly on your wings
To places I have never been
There is so much I have never seen
But I can feel your heart-beat still
And I will do great things
On your wings.
....Someday....with your spirit to guide me.....and your memory beside me.
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09-23-2008, 12:36 AM
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Great, very beautiful!!!It reminds me on my last relationship.......
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Death I am and death I shall always be
You affect me.You infect me.
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10-12-2008, 12:31 PM
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Thank you, Elisabeth, yes, it was a relationship, I person I lost and then I wrote this.
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My own is a free spirit. Noone and nothing can put it behind barrs, walls or in chains. It will force its way, breaking the limitations, but will be also present with kindness and wisdom
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10-13-2008, 06:03 AM
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Creature of passions.
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That was great.
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I am blood, I am lust, I am desire, and I desire you.
The hunger, it wells up within me. I must have you.
Now.
Let me drink you in, my dear one
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10-13-2008, 09:20 PM
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this is a wonderful poem, however sad. as you said this persons spirit will be with you. i know what its like to lose a loved one, and i can relate. again really great poem.
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...What is Faith but Misplaced Hope?...
Whoever appeals to the law against his fellow man is either a fool or a coward.
Whoever cannot take care of himself without that law is both.
For a wounded man shall says to his assailant
"If I live, Iwill kill you, If I die you are Forgiven"
Such is the Rule of Honor.
"you can tell the same lie a thousand times, but it never gets any more true"
...Facilis Decensus Averno...
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10-14-2008, 08:42 PM
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Thank you Draven and Azariel. I mostly write the melancholy style...it has been pre-dominant in all my life....
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My own is a free spirit. Noone and nothing can put it behind barrs, walls or in chains. It will force its way, breaking the limitations, but will be also present with kindness and wisdom
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