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08-17-2008, 10:59 PM
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Lost Emotions.
im not a vampire but heres my poem, it also got published and a few others. but this one is my favMinds of Emotions
I'm confused with thoughts that are in my head.
Losing control of emotions that I have.
Feeling the need to let go and explode.
Feeling anxious to let my thoughts go.
Not willing to see that the time is near, these
experiences that God has given us to share.
Hoping to find these mysteries of our lives and
feeling lost in our minds. Wishing to understand
these thoughts we have and praying to our God what
did we do wrong. Not knowing that we are the ones
that can't find their way home.
Feeling the need to say and to show how we feel but
can't explain the thoughts we have.
Feeling lonely and sad, but forgiving is what I have.
Confused and lost, but let God show us the way.
So pray that our God will bring us back, back home
where we will lay. Heaven is our home where we will
not die, for that He plans out our lives.
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08-18-2008, 06:34 PM
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aww... it is beautiful =)
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08-19-2008, 12:44 AM
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thank you dear 
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08-19-2008, 02:35 AM
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this truly is beautiful my love! you have quite a talent and (since i believe in God) it is the kind of poem that gives me hope.
Scarlet
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08-19-2008, 03:26 AM
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aww thank you dear. if you want you can go to poetry.com and put my name in Chantel Parra and i have other poems that have been published
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08-19-2008, 03:38 AM
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you are very welcome. i too used to get my stories and poetry published. i couldn't tell you where those books are now, but i have been. i do more art and self writing now than poetry. i draw a lot and take pictures. i have some of my photography on my profile now.
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i am strong...for i am a Corvinus
live simply. speak honestly. love completely.
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08-19-2008, 03:56 AM
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really? awesome man. i will check them out
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08-23-2008, 08:25 PM
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Yes, it was beautiful. I was never really good at writing poems, myself.
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Vampire, Vixen, Erotic Temptress and Demon Goddess.
"I made it through the wilderness. Somehow I made it though. Didn't know how lost I was until I found you. I
was beat, incomplete I'd been had, I was sad and blue, but you made me feel shiny and new.
-Madonna, Like A Virgin
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2EUpe...eature=related
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