I'm currently writing a modified role-playing vampire system, based on world of darkness. It's awesome. However, for unexplainable reasons I suddenly came up with this little rime. Enjoy, it's my first ever.

Hold your whisper, stop the mumble.
Unless you have a desire to die.
This will really make your toes crumble.
I can assure you, this is not a lie.

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How can you love me when I'm like this? How can you see past the teeth, the fangs, the thirst? How can you follow me through the shadows in the night? - **** it, I'll just bite you.

cool poem!!
i really wanna read more!
Keep them coming hun