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07-16-2008, 10:42 PM
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Serial Killer Poetry
This is the first of a series of Serial Killer poems I wrote:
Beauty in a moment of cruelty
Your body laying on the ground
your dead eyes staring at me
not breathing, not a single sound
how did you think you death would be?
In your eyes I see my soul
shattered, all most dead
its the real victim when my hate unfolds
but now I'm calm - the beast has been fed
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07-16-2008, 10:55 PM
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lol!!!interesting title!!
Nice poem
My favorite line is "In your eyes I see my soul shattered, all most dead"
Brilliant hun!!
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07-16-2008, 11:02 PM
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Thank you very much sweety! 
Last edited by Morgoth; 07-16-2008 at 11:05 PM.
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07-16-2008, 11:04 PM
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No. 2
Dreaming of Death
Calm and quite I fall asleep
I start to smile a bit
I'm within my dream - very deep
my dangerous lust has been lit
there are no drugs in the world for me
I use no coke, I use no meth
'cause the only satisfaction will be
when I dream of my fetisch - death!
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07-16-2008, 11:31 PM
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your welcome!!
another good one 
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07-17-2008, 06:28 PM
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No. 3
Patrick Bateman
The person Patrick bateman doesn't exist
but the very concept of me do though
I have a physical body - eyes and fists
I have the ability to think - fast and slow
yet I'm not there
But Patrick Bateman simply cannot be
I have the blood of a lot of people on my hands
the bodies on the floor makes it easy to see
and I seem to be able to move and dance
Yet I'm not there
Yes, I am tall, strong and fairly handsome
still you beg for your life and try to escape
and in a week you'll be listed at missingpeople.com
something is wrong - I have an urge to kill and rape!
the american psycho is here, and Patricks gone
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07-26-2008, 04:39 AM
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Great work there dude 
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The only god that I seem to follow is the dollar. It defines what I can and cannot have. It provides security and brings me food, granted if I can perform the ritual of "buying". High-priests of this god demand that I work in the temple so that way I am contributing to the institution as whole. I'm working at accomplishing training so that way I can then accept greater tutelage and move up in the hierarchy.
---- And that folks, is a good analogy for our society, IMHO.
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07-26-2008, 05:25 PM
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thank you 
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07-26-2008, 05:48 PM
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No. 4
Becoming a God
to take somebodies life isnt all
everyone can kill - big and small!
to grap the energy of life
you'll need a lot more than a knife
you'll need to be emotionless
so you have no reason to confess
you have to be invisible for the squad
or else they'll stop you becoming a god
the mighty red dragon you see I am
a hundred times more feared then the son of sam
but what I really seek is a lot more
I demand forever subjection and awe!
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08-03-2008, 04:21 PM
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I love all your poems, dear. 
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Seduction is the greatest power we possess.
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