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Old 07-14-2008, 02:25 PM
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Default Poem- I got bored so I decided to write

Alright, I'm kinda scared to post here, I just hope that this isn't to emo vampire :P critisize to your hearts content. Guarenteed, you can't hurt my feelings. But I'm just coming up with this off the top of my head so here goes.

Hunger flowing through me,
like the blood through my veins,
I look to the sky,
waiting for the rain.

The water hits my skin,
rhythmically like a heartbeat
It feels like I'm watching my life
run by me so I take a seat.

I watch my past,
but I'm watching through the glass,
and I can't watch any more.
I stand and turn my back.

I need to feel the blood,
running past my lips.
I'm barely hanging onto life,
but I'm tempted to loosen my grip.

My head is spinning,
I heart is stopping,
my life is slipping,
my death is coming.

Then blood passes through my lips,
I feel the flood of guilt,
It is once again my fault
that innocent blood has been spilt.

Once again death eludes me,
and once again I cry
because once again,
I realize I cannot die.



ok yes I know it's probably pathetic...I hate it already but I'll post it anyway
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Old 07-14-2008, 02:30 PM
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That is a very nice poem, I wish I could write even a small bit of poetry without completely murdering it.
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Old 07-14-2008, 02:37 PM
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thanx...like I said...I came up with this in like 5 minutes...It's definatly not my best....In fact I think it's my worst...I had a poem that filled my whole notebook. It took a couple weeks to finish, copy read. Edit properly...ect...
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Old 07-14-2008, 03:14 PM
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I would like to read it if you post it, if you don't mind.
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