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Old 06-20-2008, 08:08 AM
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Unhappy A poem for my vampire friend

Ok so I had no idea what to title this......after a month or so of a writing block I finally took enough pain to bring on another one....so here it is...I was supposed to be a donor for my friend but unfortunately others ****ed up and ruined it for us!!!!
Plz let me know what you think...I have another one in the making....

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The Cuts are hidden, you cannot see
The pain it brings me helps me breathe

With each slice my emotions released
Everything goes numb then I'm unleashed

Blood here, blood there, it is hidden well
It could be a river and still no one could tell

Ready again with the blade at my skin
A few deep breaths, ok, ready, begin!

Oh no, this time I cut to deep
Shh....I'm okay don't say a peep

This blood was for you my vampire friend
I was willing to give it to you until the end

It's to late now, I'm slowly fading away
I leave you now with these last words I say

Goodbye My love!
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Old 06-20-2008, 08:44 AM
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very sad my friend
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thanks for reading it though!
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Aye, very sad. Good poem, but sad. No donor's life shall ever be traded for a vampires, they are too precious to be harmed thus, and as a person you are too important. Have you heard back from your vamp friend?
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