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06-19-2008, 01:04 AM
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Uhhhh....Shit( A friends Betrayal)
Do you remember when we were best friends?
When we'd share our every thought?
Every smile?And every laugh?Oh, and did you remember when you broke my heart?
Because I seem to remember that more than anything.I trusted you
The day you betrayed my trust was the day that I lost all my trust in you.
Look hrough my eyes and feel the pain I feel inside
It breaks my heart; it makes me sad to think of all the times we had.
You made me laugh and you made me cry. And all that I can do is sigh,and wonder why.
It's really amazing when two strangers become the best of friends,but it's really sad when the best of friends can become two strangers.
trust can take years to build,but only a second to break.
How can it be that two of the greatest friends in the world can go from being each other's everything to eachothers worst enemies
Do you know what its like to reach for the phone, and then have to pull your hand back because you remember what they did?
You sit back with tears building up in your eyes because you know its not the last time you'll be reminded of what happened
The light that fueled our fire then has burned a hole between us so
We cannot see to reach an end
Just, not enough.
I need more.
Nothing seems to satisfy.As hard as I try,I cant seem to hate.Only pity you.
As sad songs play on my stereo,I sit here and ask myself over and over again the same ?
How could you?
Shit like this doesnt just happen.
It's not possible for you to "just happen" to lay on your back and spread your legs for him.
It's not possible for you not to remember for that 1 minute it lasted that he was my boyfriend.
I listen as Kelly Clarkson screams have you ever been low? Have you ever had a friend that let you down so?When the truth came out...Were you the last to know?
****.....She must have been through the same shit as me.
How could you do it?
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06-19-2008, 06:58 AM
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This is a great poem, but horrible subject. I'm so sorry to hear about ur hurt and pain! I wish I could say i know how you feel, but I don't!!!! Just keep your head up and stay strong!
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06-19-2008, 10:30 PM
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Thanks soo much!!I agree it is a horrible subject!!I'll do just that!I felt much better after writing this!
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06-19-2008, 11:04 PM
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I think how you've expressed how you feel is eloquent.
Whilst not directly, I have experienced similar betrayal and it still sits in my memories more than any other of those people.
Myself and others are here if you need to talk at all 
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06-20-2008, 12:53 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Youripper
I think how you've expressed how you feel is eloquent.
Whilst not directly, I have experienced similar betrayal and it still sits in my memories more than any other of those people.
Myself and others are here if you need to talk at all 
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Thanks!Your a sweetie!!I can imagine.A thing like that is extremely hard to get over.
I'll definately send ya pm if I need to get something off my chest =)
Thanks again =)
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06-20-2008, 03:23 AM
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I am so sorry!I cant believe I was soo naive to think you wouldnt be angry with me as well!
Please talk to me!I did it here because you wont listen to me anywhere else!Ive hurt you and I'm so very sorry!
I love you
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06-20-2008, 04:35 AM
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im very sorry for your pain my child
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06-20-2008, 11:51 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by yasmine
Thanks!Your a sweetie!!I can imagine.A thing like that is extremely hard to get over.
I'll definately send ya pm if I need to get something off my chest =)
Thanks again =)
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Anytime 
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06-24-2008, 02:25 PM
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Thanks Dad!Im much better now though =)
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07-15-2008, 06:44 PM
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A very good poem. And you really prove that any good poem must have strong feelings involved whether it is hate, misery, happiness etc.
Keep 'em coming hun 
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