|
 |
|
04-18-2008, 02:37 AM
|
 |
Pupil
|
|
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: I am lost in the dark abyass in my mind....someone find me and set me free!!!
Age: 18
Posts: 127
Credits: 75
|
|
A song that I wrote
This is a song that i am working on. But i just can't get a tempo in my head.
The song is titled WITHOUT YOU
It starts out with a morbid panio, then the bass joins in, then the gutair joins, and then the drums.
Then the singing starts with the chorus.
And I am just going to type the song now.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Chorus}
To breath without you,
Is a pain I don't want to feel.
To live with out you,
Wouldn't be close to real.......Oh yeah.
To die in your arms,
Is something I don't want you to feel.
{Verse 1}
You are the reason I live.
You are the reason I love.
You are just the one for me.
I can't help myself at all.
{Intro to Chorus}
I want to scream.
I want to shout.
From the rooftops.
Please hear me out.
{Chorus}
{Verse 2}
Babe this love ain't fair.
This love that we share.
Please tell me waht I am suppose to do.
Without you telling me I'll make it through.
{Intro. to Chorus}
{Chorus}
{Verse 3}
Babe I need you here.
I want you near.
I don't know what I would do.
Without you.
[attachment=170][attachment=171][attachment=172]
[attachment=173][attachment=174]
|
04-18-2008, 03:12 AM
|
 |
Pupil
|
|
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Austin, Tx
Age: 23
Posts: 273
Credits: 2,014
|
|
RE: A song that I wrote
Damn. I wish I could help you out. I can already hear the song in my head. It's very good. I used to do things like this for fun as a kid. Just read something and make up a melody to go with it. Only problem with me doing that is that I can never do it exactly the same twice. It's different every time I try it, but it still sounds good.
|
04-18-2008, 03:41 AM
|
 |
Apprentice
|
|
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Michigan
Posts: 2,094
Credits: 5,093
|
|
RE: A song that I wrote
lol. You are SOOOOO coming over to my house this weekend.
I got a new piano, guitar, and stuff. Maybe we can work on some of our songs.
|
04-18-2008, 03:55 AM
|
|
Pupil
|
|
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Austin, Tx
Age: 23
Posts: 273
Credits: 2,014
|
|
RE: A song that I wrote
Well, if you can get away with it and you'd like my help, you should still have my number. If not just ask.
|
04-18-2008, 03:58 AM
|
|
Apprentice
|
|
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Michigan
Posts: 2,094
Credits: 5,093
|
|
RE: A song that I wrote
maybe...
|
04-18-2008, 04:34 AM
|
 |
Moderator
|
|
Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 1,499
Credits: 8,640
|
|
RE: A song that I wrote
It is a very good song. Hope you figure out what you need.
|
05-02-2008, 01:21 AM
|
|
Pupil
|
|
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: I am lost in the dark abyass in my mind....someone find me and set me free!!!
Age: 18
Posts: 127
Credits: 75
|
|
RE: A song that I wrote
Thanx Everyone.
I worte this song during school.
I worte thso because of how much I miss my Boyfriend.
He has inspired me so much but he doesn't see how he has.
Like I have said "He is the light in my world of darkness. My rain on a sunny day. My hope when i am hopeless. And my love when I Have nothing left"
|
05-02-2008, 01:42 AM
|
|
Apprentice
|
|
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Michigan
Posts: 2,094
Credits: 5,093
|
|
RE: A song that I wrote
awwwwwh!
|
05-02-2008, 01:43 AM
|
|
Pupil
|
|
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: I am lost in the dark abyass in my mind....someone find me and set me free!!!
Age: 18
Posts: 127
Credits: 75
|
|
RE: A song that I wrote
Thanx Shandee.
I miss him so much.
Even though i know he is home.
|
05-02-2008, 01:46 AM
|
|
Apprentice
|
|
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Michigan
Posts: 2,094
Credits: 5,093
|
|
RE: A song that I wrote
Np
When are you guys hanging out?
|
|
|
| Thread Tools |
|
|
| Display Modes |
 Linear Mode
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
All times are GMT. The time now is 10:48 PM.
|
BattleField 2 Champion!
