-gasp- eeeee!


&aaah, I totally love the ending. it's really clever how you mention something, a tiny detail earlier on in the story, then it all comes together, like it did when the receptionist mentioned how 'the pain in her neck bothered her'.

and I can only just see the link to Twilight.. I wouldn't have really connected them if you hadn't have mentioned it at the beginning.

ooh, and another thing, I like how you flicker between the two characters. [: and I see what you mean about screaming when someone lunges out at you.