'Gasp in the darkness..' I love that bit! It's a really nice poem - kind of chilling but at the same time it's beautiful.

The second poem is great, I love the first four lines in particular. It confuses me a bit though (as everything does after double maths).

The third poem is definately my favourite! It's mysterious but it's clear what you're writing about. Some of the phrases you use, '...hurricane of restless emotions' and 'Touched by an unnatural love', are beautiful. Epic poetry. :]